I was given feedback that the animation was too fast and needs more anticipation, as well as more weight to the characters. The opening music faded out too abruptly, and I was advised to make it stop with the door being slammed open. I was also advised to extend the leaflet scene and/or change the text so the viewer has more time to read it. The shot when the postman opens the box needed more weighting and timing and expressions.
I have also been advised to change the parcel to make it obvious that it is fragile, although I am unsure if this is possible without adding in an extra shot or closeup of the parcel.
Finally I have been told that the ending would be more effective if the car was audible before it came into the shot.
This feedback will be addressed in my final animation.
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